"A theory of the development of poetry surely will reflect poetry's origins in the body and in the growing complexity and diversity of the body. Thus the 'feeled' grows - the field on which poetry grows is the feeled . . . the felt. The veldt." (45)
-- Michael McClure Scratching the Beat Surface
Lay down these wordsRocks, like words in poetry, are "placed solid, by hands/ in choice of place." From the start the link between poetry and the physical world is made clear; however, Snyder is not just placing words, he is also locating the reader in a specific place, namely the Sierra Nevada mountains. The reader's body is located in this place through visual images and associations. The "bark, leaf, or wall" emphasize the "solidity" of things but they also allow the reader to see the physical characteristics of place. The "creek-washed stone" and "Granite" that make up the riprap at the end of the poem speak of physical location, texture, shape, and the detailed work that goes into building these trails.
Before your mind like rocks.
placed solid, by hands
In choice of place, set
Before the body of the mind
in space and time:
Solidity of bark, leaf, or wall
riprap of things; (Snyder 404)
Cobble of milky way,Poems, people, lost ponies and rocky trails are all part of this scene and its creation; all are required for the physical and the poetic "riprap" to exist. Yet after establishing this interrelation between human, poetic, and physical realms, Snyder then relates these to the larger universe. The flecks of crystalline that appear in the granite "Cobble" become the stars of the Milky Way. The perspective changes and the world is no bigger than a "Game of Go." Perspective continues to shifts nearly seven different times throughout the poem from the specific and concrete to the more cosmic and abstract. The first four lines speak of solidity and the physical placing of objects, then move to the more abstract realms of "space and time." The poem then oscillates from the "bark, leaf, or wall" of the natural world to the "straying planets" and then back to the concreteness of "lost ponies" and "Dragging saddles." In spite of this oscillation, the overall movement of the poem is from the physical body to a cosmic reality, from the immediacy of words and rocks to a larger perspective of life.
straying planets,
These poems, people,
lost ponies with
Dragging saddles
and rocky sure-foot trails.
The worlds like and endless
four-dimensional
Game of Go.
ants and pebbles
In the thin loam, each rock a word
a creek-washed stone
Granite: ingrained
with torment of fire and weight
Crystal and sediment linked hot
all change, in thoughts,
As well as things. (Snyder 404)
IVInitially, the speaker of the poem stands outside the events of the poem as Earth's scribe or confessor, yet it is implied that the speaker also realizes she is part of the processes described. She speaks of the folly of the human race in thinking it is singular like the sun, when in actuality it leaves "no spark to be remembered by." The speaker realizes that humans are not the center of the universe and that they are involved in the same creative-destructive cycles that the rest of the natural world is subject to. Yet the speaker is also aware of her involvement in this cycle, which seems to be why the Earth will not relate certain of its wonders to her in the third line.
O Earth, unhappy planet born to die,
Might I your scribe and your confessor be,
What wonders must you not relate to me
Of Man, who when his destiny was high
Strode like the sun into the middle sky
And shone an hour, and who so bright as he,
And like the sun went down into the sea,
Leaving no spark to be remembered by.
But no; you have not learned in all these years
To tell the leopard and the newt apart;
Man, with his singular laughter, his droll tears,
His engines and his conscience and his art,
Made but a simple sound upon your ears:
The patient beating of the animal heart. (Millay 63)
Endnotes
1. In his essay "Contemporary Ecological and Environmental Poetry," Leonard Scigaj discusses the influence of Derrida on contemporary ecological poetry. The environmental poets he mentions throughout the article - Berry, Rich, Snyder, Piercy, Gluck, Harjo - whether influenced by Derrida or not, are all free verse poets. It is this limited view of who and what constitutes ecological poetry that I wish to argue against.
References
Dean, Tim. "On 'Riprap.'" Modern American Poetry web site. 7 December 2001.
Millay, Edna St. Vincent. Wine from these Grapes. New York: Harper, 1934.
McClure, Michael. Scratching the Beat Surface. New York: Penguin, 1982.
Scigaj, Leonard. Contemporary Ecological and Environmental Poetry." ISLE: Interdisciplinary
Studies in Literature and the Environment (Fall 1996) 3.2: 1-25.
Snyder, Gary. The Gary Snyder Reader: Prose, Poetry, and Translations. Washington D.C.:
Counterpoint, 1999.
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